Read haiku by participants at Mississauga’s Haiku workshop

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works from work-suggestionsparticipants at Haiku Workshop

 

 

 

 

 

 

suggestions for editing. We also had a great discussion upon some haiku above…

 The following are works by participants:

 Works by Jenny Chen:

tip of my tongue
little droplets
in the air

bitterness, solitude
droplets
twinkling on my skin

sprouting up
to my knees
to the trees

little one
one amongst
the crowd

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work by Ryan Gibbs:

autumn wind bends
cranberry twigs
hanging water drops

work by Zain:

glistening cranberries
in prime
unpicked and forgotten

 

works by Ireme

he loves me
he loves me not
oh, rats!

autumn already?
lonely cranberries
morning dew

oh my computer
virus galore
childhood…not the same

works by Ishrat

reflection of light
on dew
antumn cranberries

the white landscape
moving with me
endless

works by Elizabeth

summer red berry
raindrops
hold the light

spreading petals
ready to break anchor
and fly

works by Surjeet

leafless tree
still holds the fruit
among late winds

soft petals
the expression
of a baby’s smile

the white landscape
moving with me
gathering memories

works by Susan

the white landscape
moving with me
a full moon

standing in shade
between you and me
a long history

on my computer
my son’s homework done
childhood… not the same

 

Works by Lynn

toboggan races downhill
the white landscape
moving with me
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on the computer
playing games
childhood not the same
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standing in shade
tall trees sway
between you and me
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cranberry in rain
soon to fall
a twig remains
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flower opens
a pink sun
rooting in earth
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fish out of water
ants line up
picnic lunch
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Works by Vino

Fireflies flutter
The night stage
in harmony with stars

Bitter red
ripe
with taste

 Works by Josh (young boy)

gentle summer breeze
blowing up sand
a camel walks by

little pink flower
in green grass
a butterfly lands

works by Caryl

petals
gathering warmth from the sun
he loves me not

standing in shade
shadows gather
between you and me

and one from volunteer:

i am a volunteer
helping with this great workshop
sadly but for once

works from Terry Barker

the white landscape
moving in my mind
train stopped

 

standing in shade
the horse rests
i wish i could
between you and me
a vast gulf
let’s bridge it

cornflower
spreading its wings
fly away

 

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